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by BroKen Wing
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Don't you shoot, don't you shoot
the one-thing you love,the absolute
just if you shout loud enough
to shake the walls of what's rough

to shock the pride of what kills you
giving your internal strength a clue
why don't you stand and cry ?
why do you smile and lie?

then in your gloomy closed up room
you fall on your knees for the doom
crying with acidic tears burning your face
cursing the minute of life,losing faith

things I've been saying for that sad frame
a sorrowful girl,which as I asked about her name
she looked at me with an amazed sad look for true
and said me is you, am the real reflection of you

continued...with me stoned...:

but don't you shoot, never shoot
never to be alone, is your absolute
but just if you think deep about what you said
you advised your self to hold faith, not me instead!




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