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by Jim McMillen the man within
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9-3-08
Forgive me for seeing only the best in you,
for I look through a poets eye.
Forgive for struggling to break through,
Before another tear I cry.

Forgive me for writing one verse at a time,
but i'm trying to find the words to say.
before i'm convicted of my crime,
of having my scrabble pieces in such disarray.

9-7-08
Forgive me for being weaker than my lonliness,
But it's aproaching the 20TH year of its youth.
Just know my life was once a much greater mess,
as slowly I exit, seeking only the truth.

9-8-08
Forgive me for needing a helping hand,
To overcome is a task for two.
I only wish you could understand,
It takes more than me....It takes you!

9-14-08
Forgive me for having a hungry heart,
for offering my sincerity.
I think it is time for me to depart,
so you won't have to try to tolerate me.

Jim




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