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by NinjaGirl
Rating: 5.00
Votes: 8
Reminiscence Part1: Remember When

[[From the view of a boy reminiscing about their lost love]]

Remember when we were friends?
Remember when we told each other everything?
Remember when you came to me?
Remember when you cried?
Remember when you told me
That your boyfriend had dumped you?
Remember that I held you close
And stroked my fingers through your hair?
Remember when I whispered in your ear
That he was an idiot for letting you go?
Remember when I kissed your cheek?
Did you know that I didn't want that to end?
Do you remember when you calmed down
And kissed my cheek?
Remember how I shivered
And you asked if I were cold?
Did you know that I would cherish that moment
Because those words came from your lips?
Remember when you asked how my mother was
And I told you she had died?
Do you remember how I cried?
Do you remember how you comforted me
And through my tears I whispered how, for you, I would try?
Did you know that, my baby girl?
Remember when I kissed your forehead
And you drifted off to sleep?
Do you remember that I stayed awake all night long
Just to watch you sleep?
And did you know that I whispered as you slept?
Did you know that I whispered three little words?
That I could never let you hear for real
Because you didn't feel the same way...
Did you know how much I love you?

éopyrighted by ~NinjaGirl~




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