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by Needing a miracle
Rating: 5.00
Votes: 2
There once was a boy
Who was in constant need
Of life, of love
Someone to stop his bleed.

He was more than hurt
This was clear as day
It seemed impossible
How someone can hurt this way.

He needed someone
To be his strength when he is weak
A way to his heart
One did seek

She did all she could
To break the ice off his heart
Night and day she worked
A feeling inside her began to start.

Suddenly, the words
I love you came out of her mouth
She was scared of his reaction
And prayed things didn't go south.

His heart became very warm
And melted the ice
This once cold hearted boy
Was turning very nice.

He began to smile
Laugh, and joke around
She was filled with pure joy
To hear his happy sound.

They become lovers
And talked about forever
Did the girl imagin that they would break up?
Never!

For months their relationship
Was nothing but bliss
Full of love
Nothing was better than this

But one day
His past came back
Trust in us
He began to lack.

He left her
On a day in may
Cried for hours she did
How could he be this way?

It was his ex
Who turned his heart back to ice
Because of her
He has been hurt not once but twice.

He said he still loves her
And also me
I begged and pleaded
That this couldn't be

The hard work that the girl
Did to turn him nice
Was all for nothing
For his heart is colder than ice.

There still is that boy
Who is in constant need
Of life of love
Someone to stop his bleed.




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Rachel at 2008-11-13

I understand the way you feel because I tried to turn some jerk into a nice guy because I knew he could Love again and be a great person. His ex Miranda came took him from me. Then when he couldn't handle her anymore he wrote me a letter saying he was sorry... He loved me... and that he was sorry he hurt me the ways she hurt him... Then he hung himself... He didn't know I was pregnant with his baby girl. So... when she asked me where her daddy was I told her he... would never be able to see her beautiful blue eyes... listen to her cry... smell her long black hair and she asked me why... i told her... he's watching her in heaven! i know he's not because he killed himself after Miranda Stole his heart and the shattered it... I feel for you!
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